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Summer
Contributed by
xAnaBananax
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Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 11:27:47 AM in AEST
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im ready for summer
fun in the sun
to hangout with friends
to see everyone
theres parties
and dancing
the beach
disneyland
turning eighteen
tan on the sand
staying out late
sounds really fun
driving around
the heat and the sun
going really far
to different places
and hopefuly getting a car.
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Re: Summer
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by Asthenia on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 04:14:54 PM AEST
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ohhhh yes, the joys of summer! I hope your's is a blast!
"the beach
disneyland
turning eighteen
tan on the sand
staying out late
sounds really fun"
These lines made me grin because I'm going to the beach towards the end of summer and it's going to be amazing!
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Re: Summer
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 06:02:28 AM AEST
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LOL sweet wonderful youth. I hope you have a wonderful summer too.
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Re: Summer
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by Spike on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 10:01:08 AM AEST
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Oh yeah, I remember. Such an adolescent streak runs through the entire piece, capped off by and hopefully get a car. It's good to read warming poetry in Winter.
enjoy!
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