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Bitten
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 11:59:32 PM in AEST
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When I decided to go on this hike, I didn't know I would be bitten by a rattlesnake.
It bit the back of my leg a few minutes ago and now my life is at stake.
I've been yelling for help but nobody has heard me shout.
I'm going to die if nobody sucks the poison out.
I'm starting to cry because it's so sad.
My wife will be a widow and my kids will be without a dad.
After I'm gone, will my family be able to get by?
A man doesn't really appreciate life until he learns that he's going to die.
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randyjohnson
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2007-06-20 23:59:32]
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Re: Bitten
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 09:27:35 AM AEST
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thank god this is fictional! WOuldnt want to have you bit by a snake...... You put a nice message in it as well very end line how true how true
Michelle |
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Re: Bitten
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by storeya on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 09:29:07 PM AEST
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| very true! people need to stop taking life for granted.... maybe we should breed more rattlesnakes, eh? jk |
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Re: Bitten
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by slay797 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 02:00:40 AM AEST
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Last line is total non fiction.
Great wisdom and imagery. |
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