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A PLACE TO BE.
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 08:00:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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There is no place, I rather would be,
walking along the edge of the sea,
the smell of seaweed, and sea in my nose,
the cry of seagulls, sand in my toes,
the soft warm wind blowing my hair,
the sun on my skin. my mind freed from care,
the waves like white horses rushing to shore,
watching the boats as they come into moor,
a gift from God, it has to be,
I feel him close as I gaze out to sea..
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lillyjane
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2007-06-20 20:00:28]
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Re: A PLACE TO BE.
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 07:15:18 AM AEST
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Anything that expounds upon the virtues & majesty of the ocean gets 10 stars from me. I love when others speak to her pull on them, 'cause, I know it soooo well!!!
Most Beauteous...
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Re: A PLACE TO BE.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 08:45:58 AM AEST
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Wow lilly .. what exceptional beauty!
I'm with missy on this. The ocean has to be one of the
most dangerously inspiring things on earth. It can fill
every sense with so much wonder and power.
Beautiful, BEAUTIFUL write, hun. Very inspirational.
~Breezy |
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Re: A PLACE TO BE.
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 09:41:00 AM AEST
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poetic and beautiful...... the ocean brings so much makes me want to go but in reading this beautiful poem I found myself there if only for a moment.
*smiles*
Michelle |
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Re: A PLACE TO BE.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 02:04:59 PM AEST
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A beautifull write and beautifull thoughts.
huggs,
emy |
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