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Shane Part II from Bold and the Beautiful

Contributed by visionarybee on Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 11:00:06 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Shane Part II

So sad
what happened to Shane
He wasn't so bad
just suffered from emotional pain

I really diged him
and thought him quite catching
He was good looking to the brim
with a body quite chiseling

At first he looked beastly & scary
And he wasn't exactly the brightest
He did seem quite the opportunist

But falling in love really changed him
He started being nice & sweet to the brim

It was so tragic
how he went so frantic
He got so steamed
Yet he wasn't mean
He just lacked self-esteem

The Morone's & the Forrester's
mostly put him down
treating him like crap
on the ground
The poor sap
didn't stand a chance
to gain advance

Now Ridge in all this
has learned a big lesson
Bet he wishes his confrontation
never happened

If only sooner he'd offered
his help and support
And then to anger & violence
Shane wouldn't felt compelled to resort

None of the Morone's or Forrester's
treated Shane right
So now Ridge may pay the price

All them rich folks
didn't care if Shane had a dime
so now Ridge might have to do time

Poor Shane was made to feel like
he wasn't even worth to exist
first by Ridge
and even worse by Nick

Most of them thought they were better
They lacked for nothing & had plenty
whilst Shane's wallet laid empty

They were to selfish and busy
to care if he was suffering and starving
No wonder he got so angry

People need to learn better lessons
that they may take more positive action
to always keep in mind
a good practice is to be kind

A better chance they willl have
God will bless them
so they'll make it into Heaven

Copyright © visionarybee ... [ 2007-06-20 11:00:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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