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Broken
Contributed by
Ju1cy
on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 07:39:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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She sits and waits, for her lovers return,
To feel that gentle touch, Upon her arm,
The One that stole her heart, he walks alone,
growing further apart.
No message, No sound,
She sits and crys, due to whats she found,
Her Painful love and her broken heart,
left all alone, their love torn apart.
Copyright ©
Ju1cy
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2007-06-19 19:39:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 08:20:09 PM AEST (User
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touching and melodic
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Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by Thespia on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 01:05:02 AM AEST (User
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I know how that feels,
wonderfull poem, speaks to the heart.
thank you for sharing |
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Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by jackson21 on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 03:14:26 PM AEST (User
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Heart grasping! I too have felt and been in similar situations before! but i could never quite put it into a piece of writing or words because it turned from a few sentences into a book in no time at all. You, are extremely talented to be able to put so much feeling and events in time into one beautiful short poem! I send you my praises from afar! I am in awe!
Yours sincerely, Jack! |
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Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:08:34 PM AEST (User
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The feeling of sadness is felt in this write. May your heart be filled with peace and joy once again.
sadaddy |
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