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OUR SUN?
Contributed by
zenith66
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Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:18:29 AM in AEST
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ambiguous
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Golden sun of ages
past,
Epicentre of space and
sky,
Does not rise to greet mans
eye,
Although we'd like to think it does,
And red reflections in
rocky pools by shores on
evening beaches,
lending water sunsets hue,
Would still reflect the falling light
without you.....
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zenith66
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2007-06-19 10:18:29]
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Re: OUR SUN?
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 12:51:16 PM AEST
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Re: OUR SUN?
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 03:38:39 PM AEST
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Pretty write.... dusted with magic , is powerful with the short verse
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Re: OUR SUN?
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:21:46 PM AEST
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Oh this one is lovely. I could picture this one easily. I am so sorry I missed this dreamy little write, until now.
Peace,
Laura |
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