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loosing control
Contributed by
jawdeh
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Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:15:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Loosing Control!
The fire pours from my heart-a fire of elements bursting in the air, elements of emotional breakdown-not ready to use my fists in despair
What good will it do, by putting fear inside my peers, Did I do enough damage as they weep with tears over the years?
They tell me to control my temper-but do I learn, all I do is erupt-my adrenaline starts to burn
Ferocious tenacity building up in my blood through my brain, will I live the rest of my days in vain
Who do I love, and will it last, will it deteriorate in seconds like times in the past,
Instability keeps building around my membrane; it storms very lightly, like pellets of rain,
Astounding results are too far to see-I must be blind, so I will replay my life in rewind
So I can find some traces of nourishment that rejuvenated my core, the core of my existence that has come no more
The wasted years of pursuing fantasies are done; the days are getting faster, I’m always on the run
I feel intrepid, my rage is getting to an extreme, will I abuse it in ignorance, or keep it in my dream
A dream of a world where I can sore above the mountains, with an island around me, with incredible fountains
Fountains of joy, and splendor imbibed in the air, with no harmful odors to breathe, I start to tear
Tear my fears into broken pieces of feathers, to fall beneath me, as I begin to sever
Sever my anguish from what boils inside, it can’t contain anymore-nor will it reside,
How many chances did God give me with friends, yet despite all His gifts, my attitude I wouldn’t amend.
Hesitation is the beginning of a setback that glides with charge, while my pride is in a struggle, ready to barge
Barging to elude the thunder covering my trails, of a viable goal that has really derailed
Continuing my tracks, not looking back for errors, as the thunder escalates louder, I’m in a state of terror
What have I become, do I realize my own faults, being inclined to always assault,
Blatantly swerving to a place of crooked suggestions, which leads me to a state of major regression
It hits me-knocks me real hard to the ground, as I struggle to stand not hearing a sound
Silenced too long, I can’t contain my composure any longer, I’ll stay confined in my reflection, ain’t gaining much stronger,
Loosing control-and hyper mental from what I’ve been handed, the time has come when I remain stranded!
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Re: loosing control
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by StephaniePaige on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:50:42 AM AEST
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| This left me pretty well speechless..i loved it. |
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Re: loosing control
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 11:17:31 AM AEST
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One word to describe this flow
spectacular.... |
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Re: loosing control
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 06:15:18 AM AEST
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Wow that is a excellent write. I feel its depth and meaning but as you convey your feeling you ARE IN CONTROL so very much so. Good write
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