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Even The Heart Of Rembrandt . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 05:39:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like a stroke
from an artist's paint brush
my life you beautify,
a velvet vision of flawless precision
in this beholders
eye.
Your the cause
i'd willingly die for not to mention
the reason i live, that one indiscretion
i'd lie for and no defence would i
give.
You are the love i'd never deceive
engraved in my conciousness,
a beauty that angels would not believe
and yet would envy no
less.
I love you in ways i can't explain
then strange are the ways of
love,
with you i could stand in the pouring rain
and still see the stars
above.
Knowing that when
the rain was through you would be all
i saw, a beauty that ruel's the universe
defying natural
law.
Living a thousand life time's
would not be enough
for me,
a man loving you
the way that i do would need an
eternity.
your the words that flow from a poets pen
that sleep in my memory,
the song in my heart remembering when
you and i first came to
be.
Like a stroke
from an artist's paint brush
so soft as an angels
chant,
the
beauty of you
could certainly woo
even the heart of
rembrandt.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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Re: Even The Heart Of Rembrandt . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 06:24:37 AM AEST
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The Ghost Alarms are in almost total agreement. We mostly feel that this was an outstanding well written form of the poetic arts. Though a few among us are not thrilled with the spacing. As we sit at our desks discussing the abilities of Dante and the majesty of Poe and Bach we find in your work that darkness isn't everything. Even Poe ventured out of it from time to time. Obviously, this has nothing to do with your write so allow us to continue on this poem. Living a thousand lifetimes would not be enough.....that line and that stanza well it captured the heart of all of us. Yes we nod in agreement. This is powerful and is a spice in this poetic stew you have created from your poetic culanary. Amazing and fluid, we love the work.
We cheer and that is a lot of cheering for we are many!
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Re: Even The Heart Of Rembrandt . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 08:43:09 AM AEST
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Does Joan ever tire of swooning?*wink*
Like & as if...teehee.
BigLoveMuchPeace
~me
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Re: Even The Heart Of Rembrandt . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 01:04:09 PM AEST
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You are fabulous and so was this write. Made me cry again, darnnit. Gosh love is so fine. You make it seem like a dream, Ben....a beautiful dream. I am so happy for you. You two are some lucky peoples.
Peace and love my brother to you and your wife,
Laura (your hippie sis) |
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