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Guidance, Counsellor
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 10:43:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Gonna be a cowboy,
ride a big horse
wear six-guns and a hat, of course;
break my back in endless toil
dried up bones in desert soi - Whoa!
Gonna be a big star,
stage and screen
more charisma than ever been seen;
finish my days drugged and hazy
surrounded by cats, fat and laz - Cut!
Gonna be President
of the whooole world
adored by crowds, flag unfurled,
last days in a bunker, on the run
mob at the door as I eat my gu - Click!
Gonna be me,
whoever that is
no cardboard version of someone else;
spend my life doing all kinda things
that’s how I’m gonna earn my - Wings!
Copyright ©
spike
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2007-06-18 22:43:38]
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Re: Guidance, Counsellor
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:25:42 PM AEST
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S,
this was fun and inspirational. I got caught up in the beat,
but the message is what I really love about this ..
how perfectly titled as well. There is always a deep
wisdom inside each of your writes, clever poet.
(The picture is gorgeous and adds to the 'wings' theme)
soaring high ~
~B |
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Re: Guidance, Counsellor
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by Linds on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 01:02:02 AM AEST
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| aw i really like this. It's sort of different than i've ever read before, i realy like it. It flows really well. |
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Re: Guidance, Counsellor
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 02:40:41 AM AEST
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I think this one has succeeded to top the charts In all your work I have read....What an awsome write!
I love it..Very very beautiful!
Bravo!!!! |
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Re: Guidance, Counsellor
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 02:49:28 AM AEST
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this is a very fun yet inspiring write.. I like the flow and how it went to different things.. very well done
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Guidance, Counsellor
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 10:17:44 PM AEST
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Very creative, thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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