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One Day
Contributed by
Serenbach
on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 08:10:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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One Day
One Day
One Day I will speak out
One Day people will see who i really am
One Day my feelings will be heard
One Day I might regain my confidence
One Day I will find the love of my life
One Day someone will realise my potential
One Day someone will give me a chance
One Day I will show all of them
One Day I will tell them what I really think
and they will not like it
One Day they'll be punished for what they did to me amd how they made me feel
One Day people will see what i can do and be filled with admiration
One Day I'll show them all
One Day I'll speak
One Day
One Day
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Serenbach
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2007-06-18 20:10:49]
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Re: One Day
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 06:54:51 AM AEST
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Powerful I can feel pain and anger in this write. Keep writing , your have inner fire and strength use it to your benefit not for revenge and anger...... one day is always today live each day one at a time it will work for you.
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Re: One Day
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by Grownbabygirl on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 06:38:10 AM AEST
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| Wow, great write but I hope your one day comes real soon , always remember that confidence is the key and don't ever let someone walk over you because they will continue to do it until you stand up for yourself. Good luck honey! |
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Re: One Day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 11:24:00 PM AEST
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Forget the punishing,the negativity will only hold you back.Never mind 'might' regain your confidence,you will!
You've delivered so positively in the written word,now,time for the spoken.
Well done, you,brimming with determination.
Den |
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Re: One Day
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 09:28:16 AM AEST
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Don't let anger just build inside you... I'm glad you found paper as a venue, a release. I hope you find peace.
I do like the repetition, it emphasized the desperation, and that brought beauty with sadness.
Take care,
David |
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