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Haunted
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm haunted by my own shadow
As around me, everything falls apart
And the only light that shines perfectly through
Is you
That's why whenever I'm with you
Nothing else in the world matters at all
And the only refuge I have from this life
Is you
So I wonder now, if all your love was gone
Who would save me from all the pain out in the world?
The things you say
They drive the demons away
And I wonder how two minds can fuse like this
To let me know that you'll be there when I can't stand
Up on my own
That I'll never be alone
The look in your eyes cuts right through
The hurt I feel when I can't turn to you
Those nights I'm all alone go on forever
Without you
No one understands me, or why
Nothing else heals me like being near you
The words they speak give life to the darkness that is me
Without you
I run to you, my haven, and I am whole
I always feel kinda lost when you're not around
I'm naked, I'm
Missing a part of myself
You're the hidden piece I need to be complete
The mystery I couldn't figure out before
You make me feel
Beautiful things no one knows
It's music and it's butterflies
And I can't help getting lost in your eyes
I always feel a little like I'm falling
Into you
When you hold me, pain can't exist
And I'm numb to everything but our love
I know you wouldn't mind if I were to reach
Into you
But if I dared to embrace my own darkness
Could I love myself, as well as you, that much more?
I need to be
Strong enough all on my own
Before I let myself stand up against you
And depend on you to take all my pain away
But I do know
You'll be there when it kills me
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-02-28 19:20:00]
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Re: Haunted
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by WildFire on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 08:47:33 PM AEST
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| omg that is such a great poem. most of it is how i feel about the only good guy in my life right now. and i know that one part is how he feels about me. keep up the good work u r a really great poet :) |
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Re: Haunted
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 09:34:15 PM AEST
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Wonderful and deep write, Moonlit...
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Re: Haunted
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by savannah on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 07:19:29 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem! Congratulations on having someone who makes you so happy and congratulations on a great write! |
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Re: Haunted
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by Emmie74 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 08:18:20 PM AEST
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wowness.......................
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Re: Haunted
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by riverofwords on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:54:54 AM AEST
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a very great write aboput love ... wonderful
love is a very strong and powerful thing
well done
but care is always needed when yuo give so much to ANOTHER
peace be your journey
Terry |
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Re: Haunted
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 04:08:44 PM AEST
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But if I dared to embrace my own darkness
Could I love myself, as well as you, that much more?
I need to be
Strong enough all on my own
Before I let myself stand up against you
And depend on you to take all my pain away
But I do know
You'll be there when it kills me
compelling stanza... excellent poem...michele |
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