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Eternal Void
Contributed by
Thespia
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Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 09:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The rain falls,
soft against the window.
Creating watery patterns.
And in each one,
I see your face
before it silently falls away.
Like me.
Falling into a nightmare,
so deep
so eternal
that none can pull me back.
Haunted by ghosts,
of a past long forgotten.
I watch the sky,
the magic it holds.
To feel something so intense,
ended, before it began.
I stand outside,
unafraid,
in the rain.
Every drop like a pin,
falling, shredding my skin.
I want it to stop.
I want to cry out.
Instead, im OK,
being beaten by the rain.
It strips away my thoughts,
like a blade.
Until at last,
Immortal darkness prevails.
Peace in an eternal void.
Finally
I’m Gone.
Copyright ©
Thespia
... [
2007-06-17 09:16:27]
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Re: Eternal Void
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by shelby on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 12:34:08 PM AEST
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Im finding words hard right now, this is breath taking write, though sad such emotion..... THings I am feeling and understanding deeply at this very moment.
Thanks for sharing
hope all is fine with you soon
Michelle |
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Re: Eternal Void
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by Dom on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:34:38 PM AEST
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Very sad and emotional, there is a terrible sense of desolation in this poem, facing the rain alone that is heart-wrenching.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Eternal Void
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by patp on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:03:17 AM AEST
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| Very well written but sad poem, good job |
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