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The day you let me fall ...
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 06:47:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why did you do it, hurt me again... Only to tear my heart to shreds, and put it back together again. I embrace our love; and everything in between… The greatest love story, the hurt and the pain, again and again… I wonder… if you would ever change, to find the gentleness of heart, in a place… where love once reigned. I will make it through; get through it all… I found the strength in you, the day you let me fall…
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Re: The day you let me fall ...
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:28:04 AM AEST
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well written
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Re: The day you let me fall ...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 11:33:37 PM AEST
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oh wow! Dreamer this is exceptional!! What a message at
the end. so perfect in all it's triumph!!!
This was damn potent. Full of emotion and a conviction
of thought gathered at the end that will NOT BE SILENT!!
(good for you!!)
Great writing! Love this!!
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Re: The day you let me fall ...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 02:01:09 PM AEST
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This is a remarkable write. It reminds me of myself long ago.
Great work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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