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I can't smile
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 10:24:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I can't smile because I have nothing to smile about.
After fourteen years of marriage, my wife walked out.
She blames me for the death of our son.
Now that I've lost them both, life is no longer exciting or fun.
When I was taking our son to his football game, I had a bad wreck.
I survived but I was horrified when I learned that it broke my son's neck.
My wife spit in my face as she walked out the door.
I can't stand the pain, I don't want to live anymore.
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randyjohnson
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2007-06-16 22:24:07]
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Re: I can't smile
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 02:54:16 AM AEST
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| Thank goodness its fictional but sadly it does happen, sometimes a death brings people together sometime breaks them apart, a brilliant poem xxxx |
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Re: I can't smile
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:38:11 AM AEST
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sad write but as usual well done
NS |
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Re: I can't smile
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:40:50 AM AEST
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| Very sad poem..Life is not always pleasant..Nice write.. |
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Re: I can't smile
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by Thespia on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 09:21:13 AM AEST
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| Oh my gosh!! How harrowing, for a fictional poem its amazing! |
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Re: I can't smile
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by madhusudan on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 11:26:24 AM AEST
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Had you written this is a fictional poem in the end...you would have got a few brickbats ;-P
Thankfully you didnt...very sad and movin.. |
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