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THE CURTAIN CALL
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 08:05:57 PM in AEST
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Waiting in the wings of life.
to scared to take the stage.
my life became an emty book,
no writing on the page,
Then one day, I tore up the book,
that was full of strife,
decide it was time to live,
to at last regain my life,
my fears all gone, felt so strong,
my worries cleared away,
the curtains opened, the audience cheered,
I starred in real lifes play.
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lillyjane
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2007-06-16 20:05:57]
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Re: THE CURTAIN CALL
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by Dom on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 11:32:00 PM AEST
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A very inspirational write and lovely metaphor of life as a play, enacting out our joys and sorrows, and sometimes leaving the stage and being too afraid to return.
I love how you end embracing life, it is so easy to just exist and not appreciate everything around us.
Great read,
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Re: THE CURTAIN CALL
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 12:00:38 AM AEST
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Oh lilly, how WONDERFUL!! What a gorgeous, uplifting write!
I truly adore this. Dom is right ... so many times we fear the unknown
and so don't passionately embrace life the way we were meant. It can
bring so much untold joy, if only we could chase fear away.
This was so well written .. the flow, the rhyming, the metaphor,
and good gosh, the MESSAGE !!!
wow!!
All 'round outstanding! loved it!!
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Re: THE CURTAIN CALL
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by shelby on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 01:48:41 AM AEST
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lilly this write soars, beautiful flow and message so uplifting.
Michelle |
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Re: THE CURTAIN CALL
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 09:06:11 AM AEST
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You definitely did shine here...great flow
NS |
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Re: THE CURTAIN CALL
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:08:40 AM AEST
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very uplifting and yes i can see you shining
beaitful write
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