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Evil in the mirror
Contributed by
boxer791
on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I looked in the mirror and saw a face with the-
image of fear.
come here young man look in the mirror,-
come see the tricks I play, what do you say?
Do I dare follow you into the mirror, as I-
wonder what I'll see, or will I see another me.
Are you scared my boy, come into my world-
see what I see, do you dare?
I heard the voice through the mirror as I-
wonderd should I look or maybe I'm to-
scared, is it me? As the thought grew on my-
mind, with my eyes closed shut.
The voice got dark, one last time the voice-
said...............come here boy, i'm getting mad-
come in my world of evil, and i'll take you-
to your past.
Anger arose from the mirror, as I got angry and looked in the mirror and said...........I'm-
not scared anymore, life of joy or none at all, but for me to ponder myself into your world-
of hate and a person i'm scared to see -
through a two sided mirrir because of you-
So I tell you this, i'm not scared, so how -
about I mess with your head and make you -
insane, would you like to come to my world-
and play, or do you even dare?
Ok my boy...............you might have won the -
trickory of the mind, your good at this game-
and it is no lie.
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boxer791
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2003-02-28 17:40:00]
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Re: Evil in the mirror
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by Nessiecat on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 06:39:28 PM AEST
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That's a great poem.
For what it's worth, I reckon that good is the strongest power in the universe and it always wins in the end.
Fighting fire with water works, too :) |
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Re: Evil in the mirror
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:27:15 PM AEST
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The many faces, in the mirror,
Never appear any clearer.
Your words spoke volumes,
Of what we all see........
Never you~~~~and never ME!!!
Angel always....Godspeed 0:-)
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Re: Evil in the mirror
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by Dreamer18 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:06:23 PM AEST
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| I think that everyone does fight that battle with the mirror. It was a very good poem. But next time you do look into the mirror look a little more closely because there is always something there hiding. Just look really hard and mybe you'll see what I'm talking about. |
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Re: Evil in the mirror
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 01:11:02 PM AEST
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Good poem. I wrote something quite simlilar to this, but rhymed it instead of leaving it free-verse.
Good effort. |
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