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How Shall I Amaze Thee?
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 01:23:26 AM in AEST
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How shall I amaze thee? Perhaps
a salubrious bouquet that stays
fresh a moment and touchingly dies
the next, that is not my kind of love,
’O’ love; that is not my love for thee.
Tickets to a theater possibly impress
thee, but my sweet - the play so tender and
Throbbing might sadden thee; a teardrop in thy
wide blue eye – Ho no, tear in thy eyes is not my
kind of love, ‘O’ love; that is not my love for thee.
A glittering gold ring studded with precious
Gems probably stir thy heart, but ‘O’ loving
soul, my heart declines to evaluate our love
as an article of trade; that‘s not my kind of love,
‘O’ love; that is not my love for thee.
How shall impress thee? So dear I brought forth my bleeding
love-filled heart for thee - but you, rudely showed the way out to me?
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-06-16 01:23:26]
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 01:59:53 AM AEST
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oh my friend ... how tragic a write. There is such beauty and love
flowing in the first three stanzas .. a devotion that the writer expresses
in the most exceptional way. I ADORE the repetition of the last line.
It's so powerful and gorgeously poetic!
But those last two tragic lines ... oh dear. How sad, but oh how
intimately familiar to this reader, and I presume many others.
Brilliant post Franco. I think you get better with every write.
~Breezy |
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 02:02:56 AM AEST
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A beautiful work, powerful and the feeling of love just stands out..
Beautiful |
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by Tot on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 02:44:20 AM AEST
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| It is never failing..I love to read your poetry..this poem, oh so fantastic a write...I am in awe of the perfection~ Wonderful, wonderful poem~Tot |
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by Dom on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 03:09:34 AM AEST
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This is such a sad poem, to be presented with love and devotion such as you have shown and to have it obviously not appreciated and thrown back in your face is tragedy for a relationship.
Lovely write, really wel written and heartbreaking.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 12:08:43 PM AEST
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It would take nothing more than everything you already are...AMAZING!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
~me |
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 01:29:42 PM AEST
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Good work friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 01:56:58 AM AEST
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beautifully passionate, so romantic, filled with deep soulful love, a heart brimming over to choose the right way of loves expression, only to have it tossed aside tragically as nothing, wow and wow, i salute your poetic beauty here!
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: How Shall I Amaze Thee?
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:57:15 AM AEST
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amazing writing and i agree what everyone else saids about this write.
awsome job |
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