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Rooftop Mourn
Contributed by
zenith66
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Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 04:40:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Through the window, I glimpse their lofty tops,
Fixed against the coat of morning sky,
Blue dilution gently supplementing night,
Penetrates my sleepy watchful eye.
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zenith66
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2007-06-15 16:40:33]
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Re: Rooftop Mourn
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 05:00:30 PM AEST
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this is so pretty
Michelle |
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Re: Rooftop Mourn
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 05:42:44 PM AEST
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5months, your just a babe. LOL After reading this little gem, I will definitely make it a point to look into more of your writes.
I love a poem with such solid meaning written with such brevity. Truly masterful to write like that.
I loved the visions I saw in my minds eye whilst reading, but for some odd reason, I felt lonely...the piece felt a little lonely. I don't know if that was your intention or not. Great read and thank you for sharing.
Peace,
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Re: Rooftop Mourn
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by Cannabiskilla on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 08:09:30 PM AEST
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i think its great! big things come in small packages and this is one of em!
sublime! |
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Re: Rooftop Mourn
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 01:02:49 AM AEST
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Wow! I love the play on words in the title ... I think that's why laura
sensed a sadness, as I too, was suffered the anguish of a sad
and lonely morning ... even the beauty of the words you used
could not abate the melancholy that is awash inside these
few, but powerful lines. Great job!
It is rare when a poet can exact emotions with so few words ...
~Breezy |
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Re: Rooftop Mourn
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 02:07:41 AM AEST
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| hmmm very nice |
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