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Drip Drip Drop
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 11:20:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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No gas
No light
No water
No home
how i yearn to feel the warmth of exubed heat.
instead i feel the cold wrath of life's misfortunes.
how i yearn to see through the blinding darkness.
instead i wander, lost in the pitch of the night.
how i yearn to hear the drip drip drop of the water.
instead i hear the drip drip drop of my fleeting faith.
how i yearn to have a place to call home.
instead i live my life on my feast of scraps, and God's green earth
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2007-06-15 11:20:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Drip Drip Drop
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 01:38:26 PM AEST (User
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kyle, this was incredibly potent. So short a write, but with
a passionate point and an enormously relatable one
at that. What a sad situation, but you have captured the
emotion of an artist's life with great flair.
Hoping your situation is not reflective of this write ...
and if so, praying for better days ~
Tremendously emotive.
~Breezy
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