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Cool
Contributed by
midnight_writer
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Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 09:17:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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We're cool again
Or are we?
You think
By flipping an imaginary switch
Everything will be 'cool' again?
You're crazier then I thought
I'm not sure
If I'm still angry
Or what I am
But I know this doesn't seem right
I don't want the awkwardness
Of enemies either,
But maybe we should think this out?
One thing I do know -
We'll never be the same
That's just common sense
Nothing else makes sense
Part of me
Wants magic to fix everything
The realistic part of me,
Knows we should talk this out
Which one of me,
Will win?
Everything can't be cool
With just a few words
We need to fix this
But I know we never will.
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midnight_writer
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2007-06-15 09:17:34]
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Re: Cool
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 11:22:34 AM AEST
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| I liked those write, i thought its raw nature let the feelings touch the reader. I like it a lot! |
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Re: Cool
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by NovemberMayhem on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:03:57 AM AEST
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| You don't seem very confident in this piece (refering to you discription), but I actually liked it a lot =] I've been there many times and thought those same exact things, and I appreciate you putting it into words. Well done =D |
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