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Beacon Of Hope
Contributed by
honey56
on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 01:59:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking for a beacon of
Hope
From a simple stranger
Walking down a street in
A strange country
Never been there before
Poverty-stricken seem know
End..
Walking around on the street
Not knowing
Where to turn, mind is lost
Seeking hope..
Maybe a little hope
Coming from the strangers
Walking on this strange street
Never been there before
But faces shown age of depression
Of life
Lines of time
Shown worn and weary, know
Light,
Know hope
One faint tear
Pains of hunger
With sullen bellies
Is their know end in sight in
Strange man land..
Looking for a beacon of hope
Maybe a little light..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2007-06-15 01:59:19]
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Re: Beacon Of Hope
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 05:39:04 AM AEST
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A very interesting and intellegent piece. Very modern and still exceptionally powerful. The final 9 lines were quite stunning. A thoughtful work worthy of praise.
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: Beacon Of Hope
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 05:51:20 AM AEST
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your works have always had a way of swaying my thoughts right into the moment. Lovely
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Re: Beacon Of Hope
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 09:52:37 AM AEST
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honey, your last line is so powerful and really makes this
write wonderful, for me. A ray of hope is always such
a welcome and beautiful light, no?
Lovely.
~Breezy |
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