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I Want To Let You Go
Contributed by
dreamer89
on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 11:54:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm sitting on my couch just watching some TV, thinking about how I want to let you go.
I hear a knock on the door and my heart soars, thinking that you have come back.
I go to the door to see what it is and I realize that its just the wind.
I no longer can take this feeling.
I don't want to be a prisoner anymore.
I'm done hurting.
I'm done crying.
Your not my life anymore, and you never were.
They say if you love someone let them go.
So I guess it's clear you were never mine to begin wtih.
Sure I miss you, and if I could go back I would.
But I can't so I must deal with this hand I have been dealt.
Right now I'm in the dark, with a blanket for the cold.
The sun will come soon and I will smile again.
And only then will you understand how much you have truely lost.
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dreamer89
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Re: I Want To Let You Go
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by madhusudan on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 12:29:45 AM AEST
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| Hi, I would have probably written this in a months time myself...im not done cryin as yet...but this has been a very touchin poem...very well written...i guess thats how it will remain...they will never understand what they are missin out on...maybe not now...one day they will.... |
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Re: I Want To Let You Go
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 01:41:03 AM AEST
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touching write......the part about the knock on the door only to find it was the wind God that is powerful the excitement then the let down.
In the dark with a blanket for the cold....
so many words to play the heart song within this write.
Nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: I Want To Let You Go
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by Anu on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 04:28:52 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written.....really felt like appreciating ur poem n ur thoughts...!!
Beautifully penned down..!! |
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