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sadened teen
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
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Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 04:00:08 PM in AEST
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I thought of myself, And nearly cried.
I thought of you, And almost died.
You shine a light, most easily seen.
I am the shadow, a saddened teen.
Your full of life and I am not.
In my misery I shall rot.
You are joyful, passionate, and bold.
I am quiet, angry, cold.
Wish I could change, be like you.
Having friends and plenty to do.
But I can't,
I am me,
Destined to die unhappily.
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Re: sadened teen
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 02:59:24 PM AEST
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| i hope you're not serious, you can make what you want out of your life, its up to you, dying is'nt an escape, if all that crap about heaven was true, everyone would be killing themselves, sit down, work out exactly what you want for your life and focus on getting it, if you want it you will get it, sorry, i'm a bit fed up with people dwelling in sadness and negativity, " i'm gonna kick the darkness 'til it bleeds daylight" - john coltrane |
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Re: sadened teen
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:04:17 PM AEST
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| Ummmmm....I think wolf flow took this poem a little to seriously...I could be wrong...but I draw inspiration from the troubles that I go through and I’m only 15...anyways...I loved it...good write!!! |
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Re: sadened teen
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:24:41 AM AEST
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| very sad...but beautiful... |
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Re: sadened teen
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by hardcoreputa on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 12:41:13 AM AEST
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| death is definutly not an escape... i agree with you there. also i dont believe in heaven, if i did i would also believe in hell and then most likely fear going there and not kill myself. however, i am definutly serious. i have been trying for 12 years now. it hasnt worked and i have mostly given up on the idea that it will work. yet this isnt a suicidal poem... its just about how i cant keep pretending i am happy like everyone else. i wish it was that easy to just sit down and get what i want... ... ... ... |
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Re: sadened teen
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by Ju-Ju on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:48:12 PM AEST
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| omg i feel the same way girl.. great poem! |
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