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You And Me
Contributed by
Anu
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Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 06:59:48 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Tides of thoughts flow inside my mind;
There are several things i'd like to find..
Questions are many,answers are few;
In this heart there's space only for you..
They think I possess a heart very cold;
But only he knows that its of gold..
I cant believe them,when they console;
Everything seems better when he plays his role..
Musterion Me is unexplorable,every one believes;
He's up-and-coming to personify me & never leave..
Never pesky nor muzzy he is to me;
In his arms I'd leave the world gifted by the Almighty..!!
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Anu
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2007-06-14 06:59:48]
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Re: You And Me
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by candysears on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 08:40:49 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write.... |
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Re: You And Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dimes on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 09:06:36 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Simply beautiful. This poem paints a picture of a lonely girl, an outcast, in my mind, loved. At least, that's the image I get...
Rhyme scheme was enjoyable, too. |
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