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Suffering to Survive
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 07:50:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Suffering to Survive
Suffering I sit in
Silent Solitude,
Surveying the
Sea of Sadness
that Surges
within my
Shattered,Spiritless,
Slaughterhouse,
Staring Solomenly
into
Superficial,
Sobriety,
Surrendering
to Simplicity
only to
Struggle
once more
with the
Scarcity of
Supportive,Soliditys
Scrutinizing
over endless
Scenes of
Spitefilled,
Suspicions,
Suggestions of
Surreal Similaritys
in my
Strategys of
Self Analogys,
Sub Zero,
Salivating
and
Stressing,Scheduled,
Shadowing,Staging,
Supersonic,
Soul Stealing,
Slipping,Stealthily.......
Stopping,Shaking,Sweating,
Shoving,Severly,Shameful,
Secrets,
deeper within
Starving,Spitting,
Succumbing to
Satanic,Spinetingling,
Soul Scraping
and
Seizing
the
Supreme
System Shutdown to
Souless Soverinity...............................
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
... [
2007-06-13 19:50:18]
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Re: Suffering to Survive
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by fadingaway on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 02:15:48 AM AEST
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amazing...the creativity...and vocabulary used makes it sweet.
milo |
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Re: Suffering to Survive
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by artjunkiekyle on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 02:19:00 AM AEST
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| the technique of alliteration was nicely used here, and still conveyed a message very vivid to the reader. great write! |
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Re: Suffering to Survive
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 01:01:00 PM AEST
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Holy crap, what a read. I decided to go exploring your stuff after the very verbal DH what's his face....you know guy who gives lengthy worthless comments, as if he were your high school literature teacher or something.
You had said something to him in regards to...poets speaking their minds, poets writing as they WANT to write. What really is right or wrong. I do strive for no spelling errors and decent (hee hee) grammar, but hell.... with poetry anything else goes.
Enough of the rambling. Your poem was masterful. I don't know how you incorporated so many words beginning with the same letter and it all fell in place so well. It moved quickly when I read it. Cool write.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Suffering to Survive
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:26:23 PM AEST
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incredibly creative and imaginative. a highly original and unique work.
-Phil |
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Re: Suffering to Survive
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 09:26:22 PM AEST
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I love your use of alliteration and powerful words. Great job! I love all of your pieces that I have read. I will be looking for more of your masterpieces.
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