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Will you be my friend?
Contributed by
fadingaway
on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 04:10:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Direct my pain,
Channel my sorrow,
You've destroyed my pride,
And with it my moral,
I've lit the fordge,
There's steel to shape,
To make a mold,
And drive the stake,
Go for the heart,
May your aim be true,
Tear it all out,
With my love for you,
I've lost all control,
All sense of belonging,
I've lost all desire,
An unquenchable longing,
Promis me this,
That at worlds end,
You'll be there,
You'll be my friend,
Was it to much to ask?
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2007-06-13 16:10:48]
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Re: Will you be my friend?
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 04:49:06 PM AEST
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Warming write, beautiful. Friends are precious gems dropped before us, lovely write
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Re: Will you be my friend?
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 05:40:31 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write, but you must know that in life friends come and go but family will always be there for you and true friends are truly hard to find and need to be cherished when you find one. May your heart always be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.
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Re: Will you be my friend?
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by InfinitePoet on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 07:57:59 PM AEST
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OH MY GAWD!!!! This is the F***** S***!!!!!!!! WHo are you? Do these Beautiful,absolutely Brilliant works Really come from the dark poetry place within you?! If so,It's the best piece of brilliantly,Dark poetry i've read in quite A while! Don't remain A mysteryok! Keep writing and keep sharing please!! TTFN
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