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Inmate 51
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 11:58:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am the prisoner
inmate number 51...
in this psychosphere
dailey routines dominate
and when
I have the need to communicate
there is no one who understands
the things I have to say.
Looking for something to believe in
I stay around
when everyone else is leaving,
fascination is fading
depression is in the shadows
patiently waiting.
In lifes amusement park
the carousel
spins me round and round
I fall in slow motion
as the ride breaks down,
I'm down I'm up
I am hanging tough
I'm in and I'm out
sometimes I just don't get enough.
[Conversating with a chaos lord]
*What is your name?
umm my name is anthony
no no no your name is inmate 51
oh ok
and what will you do today?
Umm I thought I just chill
wrong here have some pain
oh no oh noooooooo!!!!!!*
I am inmate
number 51
a captive in the audience
until the routine is done.
In silence
I burn
cause the pressure is so strong,
as I search and I search
for a place to belong.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2007-06-13 11:58:10]
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Re: Inmate 51
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:11:41 PM AEST
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You certainly have a place on this site. an excellent piece you have here along with a most ledgable style in your presentation . . .
also thank you for your comment . . .
Ben |
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Re: Inmate 51
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:34:21 PM AEST
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Well happy b day inmate 51.
Good writing as always.
You have a big place in my heart.
Big luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Inmate 51
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 10:33:32 PM AEST
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| Great write!Thanks for sharing... ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: Inmate 51
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 05:32:48 AM AEST
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| Bravo. I like this write. It reflects those thoughts and processes of getting over that hill. We look for the new amusements in life for heaven knows we have tried about everything up to now. Poetry is a great way to share all that maturity and wisdom so I am so glad your on here poeting with us .Good write. |
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Re: Inmate 51
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by Butterat_Zool on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 06:35:39 AM AEST
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Aww... sad, but with a funny presentation. I couldn't help but think as i read this "It's a good thing he didn't come up with 'Area 51' first." Then the image of men in their fifties running weird experiments on space aliens came next, followed by more laughter.
Anyway, don't let that stuff slow you down. As tired and worn as you might feel, it's only going to get worse over the next 20, 30, 40 years, so you might as well have fun now, while you're still young. |
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Re: Inmate 51
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 12:32:59 PM AEST
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Wow! What a concept! Imprisoned inside of age ... what
a tragic thought. (That is why I seldom share mine .. I
reFUSE to be placed into a tiny box of what it means to
be that age ... in a sense, enslaved!)
The young are reckless, disrespectful and apathetic. The
old are boring, unimaginative and uncool. Will we ever
get to a point where we just are who we are? regardless of age?
wonderful write. Perfectly thought-provoking!
Happy Birthday, btw. : ) (If it's okay to say ... )
~Breezy |
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Re: Inmate 51
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 12:01:47 PM AEST
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| so genuine and beutifully written, u belong here with us,,,and happy birthday friend |
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Re: Inmate 51
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 02:43:17 PM AEST
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| We will all go through that when we reach the dreaded 5_0 so don't worry about it. This was an excellent poem |
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