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Unrecognizable

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 05:53:00 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished




Feeling so lonely
so abandoned
so betrayed
feeling like I can't
bear to see another
day

Wounds get so deep
so damaged
so irreparable
feeling like I can't speak
my voice silenced and...
Unrecognizable




5-07
Laura Horner




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Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 06:40:56 AM AEST
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I take it sis today is another one of those bad days?? What can I do? This is so sad it brought a couple tears to my eyes, one about ready to trickle down the cheek....

I so wish we were closer so I could sit and hug you.

~Michelle~


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:15:30 AM AEST
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Oh the anquish. This is so quick and packs such a blow of emotion. I am so sorry that you are going through these emotions. It is a tragedy that any of us feel unrecognizable especially to ourselves. Though unfortunately I feel we all go through it. I think you have done a great job in capturing such a moment to fear. As always you never cease to impress. I certainly wish you better days.

BRAVO

SCM


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:27:22 AM AEST
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Dear Laura, you have captured that moment of hopelessness
so utterly well here. Maybe too well, dear friend, as my heart
cries for tears that I know your soul sheds.

I feel ya here ... so hard to hold on sometimes, but you
are an amazing woman, sis. I hope for your release of this
anguish soon, hun. *hugs you tight*

~MG


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 09:12:57 AM AEST
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So sad a write brought back memories when I have hit lows....

Hugs

Shari


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 11:37:17 AM AEST
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wow laurabean!! this is so sad and so moving.. very beautiful write.. but oh so sad..

Huggles hope you feel better soon

Jennittude


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST
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Emotionally tortured flow
excellent


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:18:18 PM AEST
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((((((((((((((peace 2u Laura))))))))))))))))

I feel for you my sister and the hoplessnes of it all but don't give up ok? we are all connected in some strange way and that means capable of an occational disconnection . . .


Ben


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:07:08 PM AEST
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BRAVO!!! I can understand and relate completely,at times I can look in the mirror and be unrecognizable even to myself....All i see there is the pain and sorow etc! You put your real honest feelings into your work and it shows those are the only things that make a poem a real poem and a poet a real poet in my eyes!keep writing and keep sharing! TTFN!
Peppermint Ki$$e$


Re: Unrecognizable (User Rating: 1 )
by Thespia on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:52:10 PM AEST
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wow, so simple yet so powerfull. Lovely poem.




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