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An American View
Contributed by
RLWildPassions
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Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 03:23:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I had driven down a lonely highway
When in front, was a swerving truck,
The driver had paid no attention
To the way he had steered that luck.
I had viewed those passing kisses
"Tween him and his blonde lover,
And under my horn, I had muttered
"Speed up, or hit that field of clover!"
"Come on stud Baker; drive straight
And please, pick up your pace,"
So little was my patience
As I watched the two, embrace.
Soon, a new lane had opened up
And just before I passed that '60 Lark,
I had sneered over at that driver
And his blonde sweetheart let out a bark.
RaquelLeah:D
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Re: An American View
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:23:27 AM AEST
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LOL, Raquel fist and foremost I am so glad to see you here again long lost poet friend. Secondly this was quite humorous and ironical reminding me of how O Henry would write a poem. I loved the conclusion and the build up was excellent. Very good job!
SPLENDID!
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Re: An American View
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by 5MinutePoet on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 07:16:53 AM AEST
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| I wont take away from the fact that this was well written, and a nice piece of work. However, maybe because of the uk - us divide, i didn't find a trace of humour or irony in there. To me it read like an old blues tune and had a nice flow and good construct. Just the humour i didn't find. Other than that well done |
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Re: An American View
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by RLWildPassions on
Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 05:31:50 PM AEST
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Who cares about the divide, we are all human aren't we. lol.. ty my friend... scarecrowman lol.. love you too.. in Jesus name amen, and amen...
RLD... |
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