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This bare room
Contributed by
lozwozere91
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Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:50:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you're in a room with people you know
aren't you meant to let yourself go?
Instead i find the laughs echo right through me
and the monotonous tones pass right by me.
I then find that being in a room full of people
Is the loneliest place of all.
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2007-06-13 01:50:02]
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Re: This bare room
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by 5MinutePoet on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 02:55:16 AM AEST
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Re: This bare room
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:32:18 AM AEST
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Oh my you have said so much with so little. I agree and have myself encountered this moment far too many times. Indeed sometimes the loneliest place to be sometimes is surrounded by many. False handshakes and fake laughter. Why do we deceive ourselves into pretending we enjoy things that do not exist. A powerful work in so little words. This is admirable poetry.
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