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Your in Denial
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 04:22:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your in Denial
A smile is A smile
A tear is A tear,
A heart stays broken cause
it wishes you were near,
A Love stays Love,
it NEVER Dies,
but you chose to
IGNORE it to
tell yourself
LIES,
You Are In Denial,
and I am not,
and I'll Always
remember what you've
already Forgot.............
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
... [
2007-06-12 16:22:50]
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Re: Your in Denial
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by fadingaway on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 05:37:50 PM AEST
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It truely is his loss. This write is very emotional. A think that he is foolish to have let something as talented as you go.
Milo |
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Re: Your in Denial
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by Nirvana12 on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 06:35:12 PM AEST
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| Very good write, it flowed nicely and made alot of since. |
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Re: Your in Denial
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 10:39:17 AM AEST
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I could write a hundred poems around that last line...
"...and I'll Always
remember what you've
already Forgot............."~you
Brilliant!
BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme
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Re: Your in Denial
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:18:32 PM AEST
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again, it flows seamlessly. i like the addition of caps at various points for emphasis, i think it works really well.
-Phil |
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