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Deep Inside
Contributed by
bruce
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Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:38:30 PM in AEST
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Deep Inside
Deep inside your body
buried in your heart
The love, that continues to go deeper
as it has, each day from the start
It is impossible to explain
how you could love someone even more
But you know, this is the case
for this person you adore
When you love someone so deeply
it's like magic in your veins
Every thing just wonderful
no more aches and pains
You feel the love and warmth
given to you, in return
No need for either of you
to ever have to yearn
For the love, that both of you have
is the best you could ever get
You thank your lucky stars
for the day the two of you met
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-06-11 18:38:30]
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Re: Deep Inside
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 07:52:55 PM AEST
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Very beautifull-n- tender write.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Deep Inside
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 03:42:46 AM AEST
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Beatifully written and full of love and tenderness.. This was a heart warming poem..Well done.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Deep Inside
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 07:26:45 AM AEST
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First I`ll say H i Bruce, thanks for your comment]
This is a very pleasant read, soft and full of heart. nice job. Vincent |
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Re: Deep Inside
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by priss on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 12:00:54 PM AEST
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| beautifully sweet...nicely done, bruce. |
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Re: Deep Inside
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 09:53:03 AM AEST
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Oh Bruce, when you write about love, you do it with the most amazing
romantic truths, NO ONE can deny! This was definitely no exception.
Beautfully breath stealing, this was, my friend. I found myself
in full agreement with every sentiment, every word, each and every
line! Thoughts that rock the heart gently to sleep, dear poet.
Stunning ~
~Breezy |
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