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The Kiss
Contributed by
cv
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Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 05:00:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My hopeless molten ruby eyes steal your naked dripping soul
Your satin cheek floating restless
A fleeting smile awaits an unearthly promise
The dew of passion forms
Demons strum the harp, the angels rattle and hum
Anticipation, wonderment perspire
Wandering lips meet, alas
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2007-06-11 17:00:50]
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Re: The Kiss
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 05:05:10 PM AEST
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Alas Indeed... very passionate and warm. cleverly written. welcome to YPDC my friend hope to read more and more passionate poetry from you.
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Re: The Kiss
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 08:01:09 PM AEST
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| I really like this, although i feel like it could be a bit longer. Very passionate. Well done. |
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Re: The Kiss
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by Paul427 on
Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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| Brilliant! |
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