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How Foolish of Me
Contributed by
my_black_bacpack
on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 03:59:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I felt safe in your arms
I would forget about the world
It didn't matter to me
All that mattered
All that meant anything
All that held my heart captive
Was you
I didn't used to smile often
But I was different with you
I smiled wide smiles
Truly happy smiles
I used to cry myself to sleep
Every night there were tears
Yet..when I had you
I fell asleep smiling
It was all new for me
Yet it felt so right
So true, so real
So happy
I dreamt of you holding me
Telling me I was safe
That youd never let anything happen to me
And I believed you
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my_black_bacpack
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2007-06-11 15:59:34]
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Re: How Foolish of Me
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 03:46:15 AM AEST
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This was a heart wrencing poem.. Sad and filled with so much raw emotions.. Well expressed none the less. I can relate to your hurt and pain.. Well done.
Take care
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Re: How Foolish of Me
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by fadingaway on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 04:23:09 PM AEST
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It's a sad and captivating story. the last stanza makes me think that is was all right...but the title tells the truth. great write.
but sad. looking foreward to hearing more from you.
milo |
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