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Free Ride

Contributed by visionarybee on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 05:47:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The past 6 months I had a boyfriend
whom I thought I could depend

He did seem generous at first
then things took a turn for the worst

Here recently we had a very bad fight
but then things were never ever quite right

He practically stayed for free
for he had very little money

And his little bit of cash
he had to put in his car for gas

Now I'll make no mistake
the loving part was oh so great

Now these past couple weeks
he's doing allot better financially

just bothers me he refuses to pay
so I figured then why let him stay

So without to much doubt
I told him he had to get out

I knew at first it was such
he wasn't able to help that much

I'm not sure we can make amends
Perhaps it's just time for it to end

I don't really wish for it to be over
Yet this whole situation is such a bummer

One more thing I'd like to add
is that I'm so disappointed & sad

I know what the smart thing is to do
It's just I'm feeling so very blue.

Please Lord help me to decide
whether I ought say to him goodbye

Copyright © visionarybee ... [ 2007-06-10 17:47:15]
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Re: Free Ride (User Rating: 1 )
by RAJNANDY on Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 06:11:02 AM AEST
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A NICE LIGHTHEARTED POEM WITH THE MESSAGE THAT PEOPLE CANNOT SURVIVE ON LOVE AND FRESH AIR ALONE ! THANKS !

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