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Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 05:43:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm haunted by your laughter,
my tears are like summer rain,
Memories of us wrap me
in a cloak of Pain,........
My heart is Bruised and Bleeding,
and my soul is now Stained,
I need you,I want you,
your love in return once
again I must obtain...
So living on wishes and prayers
in Dark Saddened days I remain.
I alone must board this,
Despair filled Train,
Under The Track Marks
there used to be A Vein,
not being able to hold
you close,is driving me
Insane,
Wondering what's going on
in your Brain,
My Souls Always Drained........
PepperMint*Ki$$e$*
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InfinitePoet
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Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 09:42:22 AM AEST
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i love the rhyming, the rhythm...the raw emotion.
great write.
- Bethani - |
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Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 01:45:59 PM AEST
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Excellent piece of writing...the last stanza just nailed it.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair
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by fadingaway on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 04:01:49 PM AEST
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| Wish that you could write like that...? You do and better this is amazing....It flows smoothly and has a perfect rythem....I love it.If you want more pm me..I have hundreds. |
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Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:06:44 PM AEST
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this was passionate and it flowed superbly, great work.
-Phil |
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Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair
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by ruthann on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:44:01 AM AEST
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i am to on that train of dispair, i wonder and wonder about his love. he want everything to be his way. he doesnt understand by broken heart he just sends me away. i love your poem.
ruthann |
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