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Come to my Garden!
Contributed by
lowman613
on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Welcome to my garden of peace,
Listen to the sound of the water fall,
just relax set your mind at ease,
watch the vines grow up the stone wall,
Smell the roses after the breez blows,
With a sent of Lilacs too,
Sit & watch my garden grow,
around the sky of blue,
Fishes swimming all around,
birds chirping in the willow tree,
close your eyes to hear the sound,
Relaxation to set you free,
Come to my Garden peaceful & pure,
so much is yet to find,
listening to the waters is a cure,
It eases the aching mind!
Copyright ©
lowman613
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2003-02-28 09:30:00]
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Re: Come to my Garden!
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:27:43 AM AEST
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| Hello, Christina, I just did! Icame to your garden and saw, felt, enjoyed it. You must love spring like I do. Your friend, 'Bizzy'Gloria |
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Re: Come to my Garden!
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:35:27 PM AEST
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Wonderful write maam. Especially this time of year. Hope springs eternal. ---Russ
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Re: Come to my Garden!
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 08:58:22 PM AEST
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beautiful vivid picture you painted i loved this one
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Re: Come to my Garden!
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:08:44 PM AEST
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Describing the garden without has soothed the garden of my soul within. Each line is a masterpiece of tranquility that sweeps away the cares and burdens that weigh us down.
Masterful write. |
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Re: Come to my Garden!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:18:12 PM AEST
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An absolutely beautiful write, Christina... great imagery!!
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