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Dreaming a dream
Contributed by
knowWhat_kind
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Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
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Last night I had a dream
a dream that I was a great
artist and everyone loved my work
Last night I had a dream that
everybody would listen to me when
I would talk
Last night I had a dream
and nobody knew the real me
Last night I had a dream and
every person in the world finally saw I am not
so shy and quite
Last night I had a dream that i was me
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Re: Dreaming a dream
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:25:10 PM AEST
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Dreams can some what tell us about our life!
Great write! Christina |
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Re: Dreaming a dream
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by Percursors on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:29:40 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem because I think that most people don't realize how other people feel...even if they're a popular cheerleader or known as the quite one...but we all wanna belong and be liked by others...but not always do others take the time to get to know the real us...if they even care who we are...anyways...i loved this poem...i related to it on a personaly level and i think that's wut makes is so good...great write! |
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Re: Dreaming a dream
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 05:10:29 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Sarah... and welcome to dreams!!! :>) I can identify so much with this poem.... I am also very shy and very artistic..
You are young tho..your dream may still come true....
Jenni |
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Re: Dreaming a dream
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by taffimai on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 05:53:45 PM AEST
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| a friend suggested I read your poems, I'm glad I did, and I look forward to reading more of your poems. |
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Re: Dreaming a dream
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by TundraHydra on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:54:37 AM AEST
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| very inspiring. Loved it |
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