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I'm in Love with the Moon
Contributed by
yackerz85
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Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 12:17:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Starry night the moon is nigh,
O majestic orb of wonder,
A halo of light surrounds her.
She gazes with pale mysterious eyes
Enticing the whole world
Jealous wolfs cry, howling at her
The white robed Goddess of the night
She captivates all life in her gaze
She tempts me to give up the whole world
To drown in her limpid pools of marble light
Deeply I yearn for her touch upon my brow.
She’s so far out of reach, out of my grasp
I cry because she owns my heart,
The reason why the wolves howl.
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yackerz85
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2007-06-09 00:17:08]
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Re: I'm in Love with the Moon
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by shelby on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 02:48:28 AM AEST
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I loved this, nothing better than night sky gazing and the beauty of the moon and its glow. You captured vivid flowing images here.
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Re: I'm in Love with the Moon
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by Nenny on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 02:54:50 AM AEST
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| great imagery and word usage..love how you are describing a moon but it's actually a girl..great job! |
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Re: I'm in Love with the Moon
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by Tot on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 03:03:48 AM AEST
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| beautiful, you took the reader(or atleast this one) right into the poem, I loved it!~Tot |
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Re: I'm in Love with the Moon
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by RLWildPassions on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 06:26:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem and style. Thank you, captivating.
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