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Is it still true?
Contributed by
eloise
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Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
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I remember when i was a child
too naive to care
so long as someone was listening
it didnt matter who was there
i remember playing on the jungle gym
i fell and grazed my knee
it didnt matter who lifted me up
so long as someone helped me
i remember screaming in terror
at stupid everyday fears
it didnt matter who did it
so long as someone wiped away the tears
i remember when you pushed me away
and told me i was bad
and i just stood there dumbstruck
too naive to feel sad
i remember never feeling
a loving mothers touch
as i get older i realise
you never loved me very much
i remember now like always
when you laugh right in my face
that everyone would be happier
if i was in a different place
i remember the suicidal feelings
that are locked up inside
when i keep all my secrets
and tell you all my lies
i remember when you said you hated me
Mum, is it still true?
i pretend not to care, like it doesnt hurt,
is it the same for you?
i guess itll always be like this
better when it ends
i wish i never had to see you again
you were never my friend
maybe its just me
and what you say is really true
coz i dont know why you hate me so much
but its made me hate you too
Copyright ©
eloise
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2003-02-28 07:30:00]
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Re: Is it still true?
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by Anna on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 12:22:32 PM AEST
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| wow I loved this poem...thanks for sharing it...it's really sad...remember there will be people throughout ur life who do care for u so stay happy |
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Re: Is it still true?
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by hardcoreputa on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 02:17:44 PM AEST
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| this poem tuoched me deeply. it was like reading my relationship with my mom. thanx for sharing. |
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Re: Is it still true?
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by mblondiepink on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:35:33 PM AEST
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| Really great poem... that's how I feel about my mom. |
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Re: Is it still true?
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by Cody on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 12:49:12 AM AEST
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| PERFECT!!! |
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Re: Is it still true?
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:27:42 AM AEST
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| oh my god...i don't think i have ever read a poem that is so ME...every one of these things has happened to me...wow...beautiful write... |
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Re: Is it still true?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:57:19 PM AEST
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Wow, Eloise...I can't begin to imagine the pain you must have suffered... This was really well written... Hope the hate isn't still there,
Hugs
Jenni |
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