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A Question
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
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Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 04:43:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Yesterdy blistering,
now whispering,
shivering,confessing,
regressing,
undressing you with my eyes,
No ties,tortured by lies,
now you're checkin me out for size,
How did you hear my cries from here?
Ignore my fear,
It's my fasade,my god this is odd,
I found the missing link,
I think i'm on the Brink
of Peace,
Can I drink your Words?
I heard the answer,
Hold my hand,
Take A stand,
A moment to Lament,
No Torment,
Don't Go Yet,
It's been so long,
It's all been so Wrong,
Tired of Being Strong,
So say you'll give me A day,
Show me your Way,
Know me Today,
Sing your Song..................
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InfinitePoet
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Re: A Question
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 05:15:26 PM AEST
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The wording and rhyme flowed wonderfully, the end left me hanging sorry to say. Over all enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing. May your heart always be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.
sadaddy
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Re: A Question
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by fadingaway on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 04:57:49 PM AEST
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your writing speaks of a deep sadness...there's only a couple of things that can cause that and inspire such emotion. keep writing
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Re: A Question
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 03:29:53 PM AEST
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a very interesting piece, i liked it.
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Re: A Question
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by dancal04 on
Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 02:57:20 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed that alot. Thanks for sharing. |
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