|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Death of the Heart
Contributed by
blood-stained_sakura2
on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 01:56:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
|
Inarticulate premonitions
Raindrops secrete their passions
Sakura blossoms fly gently on the wind
And the sovereign tears break the silence
That muffles the hatred within
Falling through the flames
Which burns away theit putrid skin
And the vines constrict my body
And I breathe acrid smoke
Blood flowing out my mouth
As I reach out to the angel
That held my decaying body
But Heaven's forbidden
Tumultuous torments
Desecrates the inner being
My anima is withering
And the seizing lighting
Petrifies the the lotus
And the curse become too much
And I break the lust
That penetrates my membranes
Obsidian dreams of vision arise
As the angel stands in the sunrise
His tears trickle down in mourning
As the simple blade tears through
The heart that loved
Copyright ©
blood-stained_sakura2
... [
2007-06-08 01:56:11]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Death of the Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 02:17:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good job!I like the way you've rapped it up... ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
|
|
Re: Death of the Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tot on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 02:45:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I cannot say what I think you were trying to articulate, only what I gathered from it myself. But then sometimes, I think poems can be versatile depending on the reader. To me is was as though some soul was doomed to hell and ever reaching toward heaven. In that aspect I thought it was beautifully written. ~Tot |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
