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Driving over a cliff
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 10:05:51 PM in AEST
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This morning my wife and I had a tiff.
I just lost my brakes and I'm about to drive over a cliff.
I said some mean things to her before I went to work.
Now I won't even be able to apologize for being a jerk.
I'm going over this cliff and in a moment I'll be dead.
I hate myself for all of the mean words that I said.
She's very special and I don't deserve to have such a great wife.
I just hope that she can forgive me and go on with her life.
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randyjohnson
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2007-06-07 22:05:51]
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Re: Driving over a cliff
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by Tot on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 10:29:27 PM AEST
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| I've read a few of your poems since I have been on here, and I really like the way you personalize them....it makes them very interesting...look forward to reading more~Tot |
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Re: Driving over a cliff
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by Grace_and_Glory on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 01:03:20 PM AEST
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I don't always like rhyming poems (just a personal thing) but I liked this one, it was simple as far as language but not simplistic. I like the metaphor. Very interesting. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Driving over a cliff
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by Sheveg on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 09:53:54 AM AEST
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If this is fictional, then I don't understand it?
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Re: Driving over a cliff
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by carebear_baby_1988 on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 10:48:15 PM AEST
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thanks for sharing
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