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Loneliness Echoes
Contributed by
airhead
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Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 09:04:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In the dead of night
When I can’t sleep
Chest feels tight
I can hear every beat
Loneliness echoes
Inside my whole being
Tossing & turning
It’s you that I’m seeing
I miss you so much
I can’t stand the pain
You made me whole
Now I’m lost again
Hearts once entwined
With love everlasting
Thoughts all unwind
Through my mind ever blasting
I want you, I need you
I love you so much
I long for that day again
When I can feel your touch
Daylight comes
In the blink of an eye
Feel so helpless
I just want to cry
How did I fail
What did I do
Tell me you’re wrong
That you miss me too
I know I’m not perfect
But I’d never lie, cheat or steal
I care deeply for you
My heart only you can heal
So love me and hold me
And tell me your mine
From now on
‘Til the end of all time
Copyright ©
airhead
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2007-06-07 21:04:42]
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Re: Loneliness Echoes
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by Tot on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 10:31:19 PM AEST
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| A beautiful write! You rhymed so wonderfully~ something I always try to do but never seem to get it just right..~Tot |
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Re: Loneliness Echoes
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:44:32 AM AEST
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This was beautofully written. I could feel the need that you have for this person and the love that you wish you could give. This was well expressed and I can relate to your words and thoughts in a way. Well done.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Loneliness Echoes
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by Oceandreamer on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 07:04:45 AM AEST
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| Lovely write.This poem has a nice bite to it... It has a way of gripping,dropping,tossing and turning the reader... Great rhythm and alive with emotion! ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: Loneliness Echoes
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by madhusudan on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 11:42:56 AM AEST
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| Wow, i think its the rhymin which makes this a very pretty poem! and its so damn true...excellent read! - madhusudan |
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Re: Loneliness Echoes
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by DeeMeister on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:54:23 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to this poem, thankyou for writing such a beautifully written and sad poem. |
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