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When I See You Again
Contributed by
Cannabiskilla
on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 07:55:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Kindred hearts,
Two worlds apart,
Words lost among the silence,
but I still hear your laughter and feel the emptiness of your absence.
Whenever I see you it takes me away, to another time and place,
Where everything that happens, happens for a reason,
And everyday can be expected,
Something out of the ordinary, something special.
Whenever I see your face.
I miss you,
And I wish you,
could be with me again.
And I know it will be like old times,
When I see you again.
Its been a few years,
Time glides by.
Seems like an eternity since we last seen each other,
But at the same time,
Only a blink of an eye.
Sho’nuff, we go together like fries and a shake.
Me,
you’re baked potato,
and You,
my t-bone steak.
Mmn!
And you know I love ya like a fat kid loves cake.
I need you like food.
You feel so good,
Like a marijuana cigarette and a reggae beat.
So much left unfinished…
Someday I will be complete…
When I see you again.
Copyright ©
Cannabiskilla
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2007-06-07 19:55:16]
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Re: When I See You Again
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by AirHead on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 08:23:14 PM AEST
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| Lovely.........thank you for sharing |
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Re: When I See You Again
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 01:46:45 AM AEST
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This was too sweet. I like how you wrote this. I had to smile when I got to the fourth stanza, I like the light-hearted twist you put on it at the end. Clever little write, and you sound like a friend to treasure.
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Re: When I See You Again
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 04:01:08 AM AEST
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This was good. I liked the ending too.. It was full of love and friendship and adding the little bit of humor in this did make me smile. Well done.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: When I See You Again
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by Oceandreamer on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 07:41:02 AM AEST
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| Lovely write. It sounds like your other half... and you don't feel complete without that person.Time has kept you apart ... but if its real and meant to be , love will go the distance... ~~ Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: When I See You Again
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by aloneinthememory on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 09:57:31 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. In the beginning it sounds all nice and sweet then the ending (which i really love) is all about food. Kudos to that, very good poem:)
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Re: When I See You Again
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 11:52:47 AM AEST
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There were parts of this that made me sigh, made me cry, (with
nostagia) and made me laugh. WOW. I don't remember the last
time a poem did all that. Well done, Mike. This write was like
a friendly warm hug. Beautiful and fun. : )
~Breezy
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Re: When I See You Again
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by DeeMeister on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:09:35 PM AEST
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| Great poem, nostalgic and a little sad, and funny at the same time! |
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