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To Show You What I Feel

Contributed by WildFire on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

You came into my life so unexpected. Changed the way I view myself and proved to me there was a human out there who could understand. I hear that you gave up hope. Gave up hope on the one who always understands no matter what. Gave up on the one that gave us our life that guides us to the right path and picks the thorns out of us and plants a path of flowers. You seem to say that He was never there for you. But did you ever call out to Him in your time of need? Did you give him a chance to help you? Or did you get stuck in the rumors that He always gives you what you want no matter what? I wish that you would look to Him for help now and then and believe in Him again. For I know where I am going when I die and I care for you too much to let you hurt for eternity. I wish I could make you see the joy that He has brought into my life and the love He has made me feel when all else had turned away. I wish I could make you see how great He truely is. And that He never meant to make you feel like you were alone. He would never do that to one of his most precious children. He never turned His back on me and I never had a great deal of faith. If only I could give you my experience. I would trade an eternity of love and peace just to let you have it instead. Because I know if I had not felt what I felt that fateful day I would never believe in Him. I wish you could give Him anther chance and this time understand Him like you do me. It makes me sad to think that if you never gave Him another chance that I might never see you again after our lives have passed over. He truely is a wonderful Father and once you give him a chance He can work miracles in your life. But to be on that path isn't easy. It is long and narrowed and far less traveled. People scorn you and want nothing to do with you but you must always have faith that He will always look after you and will always in the end come through with something magnificent!

Copyright © WildFire ... [ 2003-02-28 05:00:00]
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