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granddad
Contributed by
lozwozere91
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Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 04:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Granddad
I can remember that i felt no pain,
Your eyes starred at me
still happy and content.
This cruel disease had come to haunt you nights again,
I found myself sleepless.
Gazing outside for hours on end.
As you laid in that hospital bed
you held my hand, and i held yours to
it broke my heart even just to see you.
And now your recovering
i hold your hand with a smile on my face
knowing my granddad fought it again.
You make me want to work harder.
You make me want to run faster.
You make me. Me.
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Re: granddad
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by katy on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 05:06:28 AM AEST
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| I have to say that was very well wrote, im not an expert but you have put a lot of heart and effort into so your poem was very good. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: granddad
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 05:44:21 AM AEST
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Nice work, pure and heartfelt...........nobody can ask for more.
Took me back to memories of my own grandfather who is no longer with us.
Steve |
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Re: granddad
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by lozwozere91 on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 03:40:08 AM AEST
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| thankyou very much for all your comments xx |
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Re: granddad
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 01:55:44 AM AEST
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| Good heart wrenching poem Glad Granddad got better.bern |
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