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Up up and away!
Contributed by
madhusudan
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Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:17:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The wings are clipped,
I'm dying one day at a time...
I feel rejected and lost
it seems the whole world is against me...
all hope seems lost, but the spirit remains
I'm dying one day at a time....
i resolve to fly no matter what...
I still wait to know whats my crime..
Nothing should stop me now, i wont be satisfied
I'm living one day at a time...
the pain is inevitable i still aim for the sky
nothin can stop me, not a penny nor a dime
And i fly, but i still cant touch the sky
I'm living one day at a time...
the past is painful but tthere are other things as well,he future can behold
my owner will realise it was always me...
the sky is beautiful, the world is brown
im hoping one day at a time...
only if she wanted, will i come down...
I'm praying one day at a time...
only if she wanted, will i come down...
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Re: Up up and away!
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by Tot on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:46:44 PM AEST
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| I was incredibly touched by the beauty of your poem, I think the words ring true.~Tot |
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Re: Up up and away!
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by AirHead on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 08:57:09 PM AEST
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| beautiful is the word to describe |
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Re: Up up and away!
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 05:23:54 AM AEST
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Nice write, something of a musical quality about it to me.
Perhaps someone would like to use it as lyrics to a song, I think it would be fitting
Steve |
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