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Bad Days Gone By
Contributed by
Lia
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Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
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When all the pity beggers
Have trampled all your grace
When all that once was laughter
Has infected you with hate
When everything you've looked up to
Has been replaced with tears
And when simple things you used to do
Turn into chores of grief
Keep in mind the sun still rises
And sits upon a tree limb
Waves still roll across the land
As dewdrops form in puddles
There are days you'll see the ice
Freeze in hues of blue
And with each and every day anew
Your life begins with you
You can take each day in stride
Each puzzle piece has it's place
You can watch the world survive
And keep your solemn face
You can give into the pity
And let it drown your faith
Or you can live with laughter
And let the humor erase the hate...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2003-02-28 04:00:00]
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Re: Bad Days Gone By
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 04:14:44 AM AEST
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| still the sun rises..let the humor erase the hate. very bright flashes.. meaningful write.. venkat |
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Re: Bad Days Gone By
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 06:31:36 AM AEST
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| This poem was beautifully written.. and so very true. |
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Re: Bad Days Gone By
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:34:54 PM AEST
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Excellent write....
I love how you through such vivid details take the reader down to the level of despair and then show them the hope, the light and the way to leave the despair behind.
Keep up the excellent work... |
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Re: Bad Days Gone By
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:46:49 PM AEST
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Excellent write Lia,
Beautiful imagery!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Bad Days Gone By
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 02:36:48 PM AEST
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| i cannot tell you how much i needed to read this poem today... it is not only true, but inspirational as well, without being overly flowerly... i'm sending a link to my husband to read... this is the perfect poem of the day... blessings to you and thank you so much... |
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Re: Bad Days Gone By
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:15:20 PM AEST
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| wow and wow is all i can say! |
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