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last breath
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:42:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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THUNDER BOOMS AS THE LIGHTNING STRIKES DEEP WITHIN MY HEAD
PUDDLES AND POOLS FILL MY EYES WITH TEARS AND DREAD
MY BLOOD GUSHES LIKE A POWERFULL RIVER ON A RAMPAGE FOR ALL THAT HAVE TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF HER CALMNESS
CANCER STRIKES ME ONCE AGAIN AS ALL LIFE SEEMED TO BE CLEAR , NOW SWEET THOUGHTS TURN TO VIOLENCE
WHY ME ,WHAT DID I EVER DO TO DESERVE THIS
I HAVE MY WHOLE LIFE AHEAD OF ME ,NOTHING I WANT TO MISS
HOW LONG DO I HAVE BEFORE I HAVE TO WALK THE DEVILS WALK , DANCING MERRILY TO THE SOUND OF MY OWN DEATH
I LAY IN MY DEATH BED JUST WAITTING ,WISHING ,HOPING THAT TODAY I WILL TAKE MY LAST BREATH
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Re: last breath
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 05:17:02 AM AEST
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An awakening to our most dreaded fear. That one day it will be our bodies and souls leaving preparing for the flight that seems to harbour our greatest fear.The finishing.
If soul could just remember...it can not die. It lives forever and simply changes spaces.
There is always time to live the best life if you live it just for today.
A well written and well shared piece that brings all this rememberance to my mind. My thanks to you for this. |
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Re: last breath
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by Tot on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 08:31:33 AM AEST
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| I definitely relate to this..I think we all fear death in some way or another and always tend to think that we have more time than we actually do. I think it was well thought and I like the way it was written. |
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Re: last breath
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by brew on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:15:42 PM AEST
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It cant hurt, we all have to do.....but we can move on........we can enjoy.we can have life.......
always
brew~ |
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